Great scenario but as usual, too short. It would be nice to see this expanded out to detail each characters POV.
DP
Unchecked memories flashed through her mind, like a photo slide show. The evening they spent at a restaurant with Derrick’s friend, Carlos, and his girlfriend Felicia. She remembered how Felicia giggled and flirted outrageously with Derrick. Carlos seemed oblivious to the interaction growing between his new girlfriend and his best friend, but Portia was not.
When she excused herself to go to the restroom and watched from a distance as Felicia played footsy under a restaurant table with a very receptive Derrick. Portia had been sickened when she realized Felicia was caressing her man's genitals under the table with her toes and he was pressing her foot firmly against him with his free hand in encouragement. A thin layer of sweat beaded up on his upper lip and there was an unmistakable bulge in his crotch.
How long had this been going on she wondered? She had forced herself to remain calm as she returned to the table, despite the churning in her stomach. All throughout the dinner, she never led on to what she had witnessed. After dinner he had driven her home.
